Yes. I like this one. My only suggest, look at some of Kirby's crazy costume designs and see if you can fit it in.it would help to make him look more alien-ish.M-
I like the basic look, but instead of Kirby's designs, I suggest you look at gladiator armor. Carter's basically a space gladiator; this version looks like a space pirate--a Starjammer. but I like the physicality of him.